Spell it! L.O. V. E.

L. O. V. E.

Some say its meaning is greatly misinterpreted,
But I would like to suggest otherwise,
Because it is this feeling that keeps me excited,
And it remains why there are always glitters in my eyes.

The simple four letter word is love,
And the much expected season is Valentine.
Go grab your partner and keep her close,
For this season is a special one.

The simple four letter word is love,
And am fueling mine up with turpentine.
Anyone who comes between us will receive some “blows”,
For this love is reserved for you, my special one.

Comments

16 responses to “Spell it! L.O. V. E.”

  1. cheye maxwell hudi Avatar
    cheye maxwell hudi

    Your poem on love is great. L.o.v.e indeed, is very complex but your piece exposes love as being simple. Generally based on the fact that; valentine has greeted you both in a love fuelled season. I can’t disagree any better.
    Your endlines rhyming is nice bro…. and your thoughts are explicit, if not for the incoherency in structure.

    1. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Thanks Bro! But then, I think Love is very simple. And the structure of this writing is intentionally muddled.

  2. Joseph O. Owusu Avatar
    Joseph O. Owusu

    This can only be written by a man in Love!!!

    1. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Hahaha. We need to travel back in time. February 2014.

  3. Sarpomaa Nkansah Avatar
    Sarpomaa Nkansah

    Pidho are u in love? Who is she?
    Spell her name

    1. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Hahaha. This was in 2014. Pressure.

  4. jennifer Avatar
    jennifer

    Beautiful piece there

    1. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Thank you for the feedback.

  5. Lin Avatar
    Lin

    Awww. So sweet

    1. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Thanks for reading.

  6. Sena Avatar
    Sena

    OmG!!! I have got goosebumps.

    1. pidho1 Avatar
      pidho1

      Hahaha, and why is that?

    2. mz_Scenah Avatar

      I guess the piece hit a spot for me… I guess????

    3. Shepherd Morttey Yaw Avatar
      Shepherd Morttey Yaw

      Hahaha. I can only guess too.

  7. Sharry Avatar
    Sharry

    …..that is indeed the four letter word called L.O.V.E. Nice one, keep it up.

    1. pidho1 Avatar
      pidho1

      Thanks. 🙂

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